wow! great job colouring! the shading is really consistant.

Much thankies! I twitch at unconsistant shading >.<

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SWEET! MYSTIC QUEST! odd... they remind me of Atrap, Penny, Kail, Tayne, and Ramen from my story

lol, really? Awesome. What's your story about? =3

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I changed my name.

It's got a story line like mystic quest... kinda, but not much really.

Sage: ANNOYS THE HELL OUTTA THEM ALL AND APPEARS RANDOMLY 'guess what I gots for the tower? SAGEBRUSH! get it? It's a pun!'

Atrap: 12... brown hair green eyes wears blue(like mystic quest =3) and he's kinda got a thing for Kail >> and he REALLY wants to warp. He was poisoned by trees because of the sage not giving him a 'stupid weapon'. He hates being called Penny's boyfriend, HE DOESN'T LIKE HER! He gets a sword. and he kicks stuff. Except the king. He almost dies and he pretends he was that moment and Kail freaked out to get a lil' love scene because he thought the story was boring.

Kail: She's not very nice... she's got red hair and green eyes... green dress... 12 too...annoys Atrap a lot but Atrap thinks she likes him because se's teasing him like that. When she find out about what Atrap did she smacked him over the head.

Tayne: 14, he uses ninja stars because Atrap stole his hookshot (dragon claw) He kinda has a buzzcut and stays with Atrap until he finds the first stone. Tayne has gray eyes and enjoys going the Firetown's bar to have a 'seed drink.' Seed drinks are a curing item called seeds, mixed with other stuff... a lil' bit of cure... but Tayne gets drunk on it, very funny. Seeds are normally nasty, but he sits down and chews on them. He hates the abuse of seeds (like being tossed on the floor). He has walking problems from the bridge.(ya know, the bridge Reuben falls off, changed characters.)

Ramen: he's only 10! He idolizes Tayne, he goes to the bar and counts Tayne's drinks. His father moved to Winda, he refused to go with him and his lil' sister. At one point, him and Tayne climb a mountain, and on their break, he sees Tayne with his mouth stuffed up like a chipmunk! He has a mace... and he warps a lot. It makes Atrap MAD.

Penny: sweet is how she starts out meeting atrap.(first impression, yay!) but she ENJOYS killing crap, and liked going with Atrap and Kail to Piza's tower.(lol. Pizza. without a z. that was easy.) she has first off, a climbing tool(yay for hitting monsters over the head with it and scratching them) and then a bow and arrow

it's about 40 pages long... I'll do story art if anyone wants me to ^-^

Yessss, that's so neat, it's like, little AU MQ (not much, their all in their late teens in the game). How cute ^^ I'd love to read it it, and story art would be bad-ass (I'd probably do some if I read it, I am that way, indeed) ^^.

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okay! I'll kinda put what they look like ^-^; had no idea you liked the idea so much...

Yes, I'm very interested. ^^ Hehe, and we have a Mystic Quest club, if you'd wanna join. It's at ~FFMQFans. Me and ~Muffeevee run it, and we're always looking for more members. ^^

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I'm really fan of FF Mystic Quest ! I've written a long long long fanfic some years ago ... That was my first RPG When I find a FFMQ fanart, it's a real pleasure !!! But I have to confess that I was shocked by Benjamin + Kaeli, certainly cause I always thought Tristan+ Kaeli ^^° Your Ruben ( it's his US name ? 'cause for me, in France, it's Rubicon ( so hoorrible U_U ) ) so, I was saying ... Your Ruben is very cool and your Tristam too ! ( Tristam, my love ! lol )

*sigh* so hard to speak english ...